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    what is wrong in this sentence?

    Having Church wide support for added accountability for your success.

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    The sentence begins with a participle and is not a finished sentence. You need the other half which would be the principle sentence of the whole.


    Having Church wide support for added accounability for your success, we will give you the loan.


    I have added my own sentence to show you what I mean.

    Tommyh

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