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    I am an intense, driven, results-oriented self-starter whose sense of urgency is tempered and disciplined by my concern for the accuracy and quality of my work. I want to re-word this w/out saying the word I so much

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    As an intense, driven, results-oriented self-starter my sense of urgency is tempered by a commensurate concern for the accuracy and quality of the work being done.
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    rdunelvy82

    I went ahead and posted the complete paragraph and I am not liking how often I am using the word I. Need help re-wording this paragraph, any suggestions
    I think I like As better also
    Thank you
    Being an intense, driven, results-oriented self-starter whose sense of urgency is tempered and disciplined by my concern for the accuracy and quality of my work, I hold myself and those I work with to exacting, ever-increasing goals. My ability to react and adjust quickly to changing conditions using practical and logical ideas for dealing with challenging situations is a personal strength. I respond positively and actively to challenge and pressure. I have confidence in my ability to handle problems and people. This is what I came up w/ does it sound better?


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