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    Correct this sentence. The best of all gifts at Christmas time, you and me together; wrapped with love and happiness.

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    The best Christmas gift is the two of us wrapped in love and happiness. 


    (Keep it short and simple)


     

    itsmee

    <sigh> That one works. : )
    Chiangmai

    itsmee, if Keyweaver uses it with his wife, he could end up with the best Christmas dinner yet, and then some.

    :)

    Aaaahh...I think you're ALL wet....uh....wrong!   That's not the best gift at all.  Too romantic!  How about a check for $50,000.?   That's better!

    Chiangmai

    I am sure many wives are nodding their heads in agreement with you right now.

    Maybe they are thinking "Hey Ducka, show me your bucka."

    :)

    The best gift at christmas is you and me wrapped together with love and happiness , a gift that is wrapped eternaly.

    eggplant

    Yours is wrong, too.
    Chiangmai

    lucky woman!

    The best of all gifts at Christmas time is you and I wrapped in love and happiness.

    You and I (not you and me)

    Eggplant: What's wrong with it? By the way,  your reply to Keyweaver is fine  as far as grammar and punctuation are concerned, and is the way I would've responded if I thought it was wrong. It could be a response to a question, e.g.," What's the best of all gifts at Christmas time?" The response, "The best of all gifts and Christmas time, you and me ..." If the question was asked out loud and this was the response, the comma would represent a pause. Any English teachers out there?

    I can't find anything wrong with it.

    Keyweaver

    Thank you. Now, I can go to sleep peacefully. Keyweaver
    eggplant

    It's wrong and you are wrong.


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