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    is this sentance good sentace structure

    As healthcare consumers, we must actively plan to protect ourselves, our family members, and loved ones.

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    Hi, yes the structure is fairly good.


    Personally I would insert "our' before 


    loved ones, just keep the "flow" going,


    plus I'd lose the comma after "and' but


    that's just me.


    As healthcare consumers, we must actively plan to protect ourselves, our family members and our loved ones.


     



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