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Hi, yes the structure is fairly good.
Personally I would insert "our' before
loved ones, just keep the "flow" going,
plus I'd lose the comma after "and' but
that's just me.
As healthcare consumers, we must actively plan to protect ourselves, our family members and our loved ones.
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