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    what is wrong with this sentence: the sun is hot put on some sunblock

    Fix this sentence, the sun is hot put on some sun block

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    +1  Views: 1726 Answers: 3 Posted: 11 years ago
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      The sun is hot. Put on some sunblock.

      11 years ago. Rating: 7
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        itsmee

        You beat me to it, Dardaigh. : )
        commented 11 years ago

        It's called a "run on" sentence.  You have two separate and complete thoughts.  It is hot. Put on sunblock.  You separate the two thoughts as Dardaigh, making two separate sentences. You could also reconstruct:


        Since the sun is hot, put on some sunblock.
        The sun is hot; put on some sunblock.
        Put on some sunblock because the sun is hot.
        Put on some sunblock; the sun is hot.
        The sun is hot, so put on some sunblock.


        And so on. There are many ways to correct the run-on sentence.  

        11 years ago. Rating: 1
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          The sun is always hot but you don’t need sunblock when the moon is high.  tee hee.  I just had to say it, bright lady.  : )

          11 years ago. Rating: 0
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