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it sounds awk and i think it needs a rewrite: i'll try. Megan and her sisters enjoy ice-cream on Sundays. On other days of the week they refuse ice-cream except for Bethany who takes a cup of Vanilla and rubs it on her face to promote a glowing complexion. Recently Chanel 4 interviewed Bethany about her curious ways. Google Bethany Beldin beauty treatments.

15 years ago. Rating: 1
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It's not a sentence, so therefore not correct. Hint: there is no verb.

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I've actually seen this work problem posted on this forum before, that's how I know it's homework, lol I don't mind helping but I will not just give answers.

15 years ago. Rating: 0
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We do not do homework here. You correct the sentence and we'll tell you if it's right.

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is this sentence correct:"happy go lucky" needs to study a little harder?

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Have you worked it out yet happy go lucky???

Moneygirl gave you the clue: no verb.

Change "enjoying" to "enjoy" and you have a sentence, which you did punctuate correctly.

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In other words, what you have written is incorrect. Try again. If you really don't understand the rules I will explain, but Colleen is right: we're not here to DO your homework.

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