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Being an intense, driven, results-oriented self-starter whose sense of urgency is tempered and disciplined by my concern for the accuracy and quality of my work, I hold myself and those I work with to exacting, ever-increasing goals. My ability to react and adjust quickly to changing conditions using practical and logical ideas for dealing with challenging situations is a personal strength. I respond positively and actively to challenge and pressure. I have confidence in my ability to handle problems and people. This is what I came up w/ does it sound better?